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I don't usually write relationships other than Canon - but when I saw flamingnargle I got an idea. And when I get ideas I write them down (you should see how chaotic my book is becoming, lol).

So here is the story of Harry, Ginny and Luna on a picnic. With a surprise for some...



It was an amazing day for a picnic: blue skies, fluffy clouds and the lazy drone of bumblebees. The quiet had become a bit too much for Harry and he’d left to put his owl chick through some practice flights but the other two hardly missed him.

Chatter cycled carelessly for a half hour or so before Ginny quite noticed she was watching Luna's mouth as she spoke. She closed her eyes but the soft pink of Luna’s lips was still there. Warm and slightly spicy from the food they’d eaten.

What's happening to me? I get round Luna lately and go mad. I can't want to kiss her. I'm in love with Harry!

Opening her eyes she found Luna's soft grey staring into her own from a few inches away. “Are you feeling ok?"

Ginny was no longer aware of the sun and cloud and bees. Just their mingled breath. Come on Harry, she thought, come back...

"You can kiss me if you want" Luna said cheerily, "kissing friends is fine. I want to kiss you and Harry and…"

Their lips met. Not softly and gently as Ginny had imagined but with a hungry passion.

"Bloody hell" said Harry.




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On January 11th, 2011 12:07 am (UTC), mksolomon commented:
Fun! I really enjoy Ginny's anxiety, wishing Harry to rejoin them so she won't have to face what she's obsessing about. And, of course, Luna, who knows. :)
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On January 11th, 2011 08:42 am (UTC), eyyeofnewt replied:
Thank you so much :)) It was great fun to do and there may be loads more - I have ideas for about twenty chapters of this... lol
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On January 12th, 2011 05:39 pm (UTC), mickawber_fics commented:
Nicely done! I too love Ginny's inner turmoil--and the fact that you left the ending so ambiguous. Was that a shocked "Bloody hell"? An angry one? An excited one? A thoroughly confused one?

Of course, this being my OT3, I don't need to say how I hope it'll turn out! ;-)
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On January 13th, 2011 06:28 am (UTC), eyyeofnewt replied:
Thank you :)

There is no doubt you'll find out soon...
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On January 13th, 2011 09:38 pm (UTC), mickawber_fics replied:
Yay!

:-D
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On January 13th, 2011 11:38 pm (UTC), forest_rose commented:
Heeee! You know I love this, but I thought I'd say so here anyway :-) I can just imagine the expression on Harry's face! xxxx
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On January 16th, 2011 01:31 am (UTC), eyyeofnewt commented:
Chapter two is up and ready :) Hope you all like it!
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